You've thought very carefully about the set up of your shots, the mise-en-scene and the lighting (it's difficult to film at night without specialist lighting).
You've used a variety of shot distances as appropriate and the material shot is appropriate to the task set. The narrative is very easy to understand so it has been edited so that meaning is apparent to the viewer. You've used varied shot transitions, captions and other effects selectively and appropriately; you've
used sound with images and editing appropriately for the task.
You made an excellent contribution to construction.
Credit the music in the titles (if you haven't already)
This is good but perhaps a little too predictable... I'll get another teacher to mark it with me for a second opinion incase I'm being too harsh. I do think a lot of thought and planning has gone into it so I would like to see you reach level 4 (32-40)
Radio advert 7/10