Great idea, much more interesting than the first attempt. Had you answered ALL the questions in full you could've had a very high grade here. You are being awarded here for your discussion of conventions and technical codes, your discussion of your marketing, your ability to communicate your ideas and your creativity in presenting the information
EBI:
I suggest you record details of your audience and how you attracted them and play this over your film at the end of the existingevaluation or post a seperate blog to address these questions in full.
Saturday, 8 May 2010
Friday, 7 May 2010
Production Grade: 47/60
Film: 31/60WWW:
You've thought very carefully about the set up of your shots, the mise-en-scene and the lighting (it's difficult to film at night without specialist lighting).
You've used a variety of shot distances as appropriate and the material shot is appropriate to the task set. The narrative is very easy to understand so it has been edited so that meaning is apparent to the viewer. You've used varied shot transitions, captions and other effects selectively and appropriately; you've
used sound with images and editing appropriately for the task.
You made an excellent contribution to construction.
EBI:
Credit the music in the titles (if you haven't already)
This is good but perhaps a little too predictable... I'll get another teacher to mark it with me for a second opinion incase I'm being too harsh. I do think a lot of thought and planning has gone into it so I would like to see you reach level 4 (32-40)
Poster: 9/10
Radio advert 7/10
You've thought very carefully about the set up of your shots, the mise-en-scene and the lighting (it's difficult to film at night without specialist lighting).
You've used a variety of shot distances as appropriate and the material shot is appropriate to the task set. The narrative is very easy to understand so it has been edited so that meaning is apparent to the viewer. You've used varied shot transitions, captions and other effects selectively and appropriately; you've
used sound with images and editing appropriately for the task.
You made an excellent contribution to construction.
EBI:
Credit the music in the titles (if you haven't already)
This is good but perhaps a little too predictable... I'll get another teacher to mark it with me for a second opinion incase I'm being too harsh. I do think a lot of thought and planning has gone into it so I would like to see you reach level 4 (32-40)
Poster: 9/10
Radio advert 7/10
Thursday, 6 May 2010
Planning grade: 17/10
WWW:
Excellent technical analysis and application of key concepts to film. Lots of planning has gone into scripts, storyboards and shooting then re-shooting the film. Excellent team work and time management.
Excellent technical analysis and application of key concepts to film. Lots of planning has gone into scripts, storyboards and shooting then re-shooting the film. Excellent team work and time management.
Friday, 30 April 2010
Monday, 26 April 2010
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